Feedback - 13 Dec

Connor,

some good progress to date and your practical work is taking shape.

Most of the research work is there although there are a few things missing and I do think that you could make some small improvements which will improve your mark.

You need to add your target audience mood board and bear in mind that ALL mood boards (you also need to add your colour and font mood boards as well) need a brief analysis relating to target audience and how the mood board relates to and reflects the target audience.

You also need to add the questionnaire results and analysis for the main task. This is similar to the one you did for the preliminary task.

Currently, you do not have any planning work posted to your blog. It is possible that you have completed this and not posted it yet - if this is the case, get this corrected ASAP!
You should have completed your initial ideas statement, colour and font mood boards and uploaded rough sketches for your main products.

Your Xmas holiday work is to fill the gaps in your research and planning work. You also need to upload drafts of your 3 main products so I can assess these and give you some feedback over the holidays as well.

I do also think that you can make some improvements to the analysis work you have created already. Some of the analysis work is in more depth than others and it is important to remember the work needs to be visually interesting as well as correct in terms of content. Speak to me and I will go through with you where elements could improved. Some need more work than others - in some cases it could be just adding a few images of logos and magazines. In others, you need to add a bit more detail.

Carl.